This was good (bummer to hear you're feeling bleh) but constructive crit? Too many disjointed sentences, (although this is coming from the queen of disjointed-ness) particularly at the end...I think. It's a cute ide, I like it. Typical you for using disney. Wish I still had those sacs...
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Date: 2009-10-25 07:24 am (UTC)